lunes, 8 de junio de 2009

present perfect v/s present simple

Well about me, about my life. I have lived in Colina all my life. when i was a baby, i lived with my grandmother and my aunt during eight years. After that I went to live with my parents. The ege 14, I was in a boarding school with mybrother, becouse my mom in this time she was a chronic disease colled "LUPUS" this disease my mom she did for sixteen years, for that reason she didn't care us. to the next year

1 comentario:

  1. Good attempt Francisca
    Some things to think about:
    during eight years
    she was a chronic disease
    she did for sixteen years

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